The Rig Comments

I loved the ruggedness of this one David, a lovely read, very enjoyable. Good rhyming and good flow. Love Ernestine XXX

nice baby. love and peace xo Trisha

A strong picture of a tough way to make a living. Good work (the poem!)

You could shape this interesting insight in working a dangerous job, into couplets easily David, which I think would make it flow much better, there are a few typos, 'scared' for a start but I will pm you my recommendations if you like. You portray the fear and danger in this lonesome, but well paying job our boys do to keep us moving on, very well indeed. A good poem. Smiling at you, Tai