Wednesday, March 13, 2013

The Rider Of Death Comments

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A rider swiftly approaches, a horseman cloaked in black
His face shrouded in darkness, a scythe across on his back
He rides a pale stallion, it's hide hide decayed and dead
Mortal eyes can't penetrate the darkness of the hood o'er his head
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Tim Vallie
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Titi Dale 22 March 2013

A M A Z I N G. I love your flow! ! It just went in and out of me, the rhymes are reaaaallllyy good too. Can't wait for more!

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Saint Cynosure 13 March 2013

This is good Tim I liked it.

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Tim Vallie

Tim Vallie

Duluth Minnesota
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