A boy told me
if he roller-skated fast enough
his loneliness couldn't catch up to him,
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Trying to be a Champion! ! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
A wonderful poem imbued with a meaningful message. Yes, to leave loneliness is a victory.
'pink petals that have never felt loneliness, no matter how slowly they fell. '... is so beautiful. A nice poem indeed.
A victory! To leave your loneliness.....A beautiful poem is amazingly shared.
A victory! To leave your loneliness panting behind you on some street corner../// a beautiful poem shared
A victory! To leave your loneliness panting behind you on some street corner while you float free into a cloud of sudden azaleas, great write great 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
what inspired you to get into roller skating I wanted to escape my loneliness
this is a nice example of how to turn a personal vignette into a charming poem. -gk