***the Rider Comments

It is a horror bed story for men :) with no love and only a ghost of an evil woman, well penned story, absorbing like a nightmare...You are good in what are you doing :)

Remarkable write, you certainly have the gift Coach. all the very best Jon

All the touchtones of a Hitchcockian story, or an abreviated Stephen King penning, is most present here, and bristling, as this most honoured recipient of your talented tell tale of fictioned madness, be one that i most assuredly recommend, for a bedtime literary snack, and in fact about to place this reader in a most enscocing state of slzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz.....

This reader always judges for herself, and adjudicates a minimum of a fair ten... t x