Monday, February 4, 2008

The Ride Of Life..... Comments

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I could hold you and try with all my might
To kiss away the pain
I could wipe clear all the marks and stains
But would it be right?
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Patricia Gale
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Ernestine Northover 04 February 2008

Truth in all its entirety. What a ride! Great read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Broken Peaces 04 February 2008

Patricia your work never ceases to amaze me, the poem is full of reality the depth of feeling you produce is that of a true poet 10 Chris

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Thad Wilk 04 February 2008

A very capturing poem Patricia! ! A pleasure always to read your writes! ! ! *10*! ! best regards Friend Thad

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 February 2008

Some pains, it's true have to be Endured, but not alone if there is heart out there so in tune with yours... Loved the poetic wisdom patricia.. Andy x 10

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Nibedita Deb 04 February 2008

Really inspiring and full of positive energy. Nice read.

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