Monday, December 7, 2020

The Ride Comments

Rating: 5.0

The trick is to take
your eye off the ball - forget
and enjoy yourself.
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anais vionet
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Bernard F. Asuncion 08 December 2020

A well penned poem.... Truly impressive and fabulous.....5 stars*****

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Khairul Ahsan 07 December 2020

Agree to the last stanza.

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M Asim Nehal 07 December 2020

Excellent Senryu series. Ignore that small voice - enjoy life's pleasures, thrills, and delight in love.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 07 December 2020

We need to flip your age from 17 to 71. The wisdom in your poem is deep. Well done. Ok ok...17+71÷2=44. Thats better. The wisdom of a 44 year old

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