Thursday, April 17, 2008

The Rhythm Of The Dance Comments

Rating: 5.0

A warm balmy eve on palm fringed beach
A bonfire burns, out of touch out of reach
Whispers of waves lapping the shore
A full moon reflecting the ocean's amour
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Bob Gibson
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Fay Slimm 28 June 2009

The rhythm of life never need falter Bob - and your passionate dance will always be there in your heart.... a really good flow to this romantic poem....10 + ++ Fay

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Sarwar Chowdhury 03 October 2008

fine! a lovely composition indeed! ..........10

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Wendy Bureau 12 August 2008

Oh.. Tastefully done Bob :) What a divine lover's dance you have whisked this reader away on.. Romantic.. sultry... sexy.. Passion knows not of age..and a kiss is never just a kiss.. Wendy :)

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Mark Nwagwu 17 April 2008

gosh! you take my breath away with your pace - a dance of its own - the purity of movement, the lnguage of life. This is good, very good, very very good.

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