A warm balmy eve on palm fringed beach
A bonfire burns, out of touch out of reach
Whispers of waves lapping the shore
A full moon reflecting the ocean's amour
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Oh.. Tastefully done Bob :) What a divine lover's dance you have whisked this reader away on.. Romantic.. sultry... sexy.. Passion knows not of age..and a kiss is never just a kiss.. Wendy :)
gosh! you take my breath away with your pace - a dance of its own - the purity of movement, the lnguage of life. This is good, very good, very very good.
The rhythm of life never need falter Bob - and your passionate dance will always be there in your heart.... a really good flow to this romantic poem....10 + ++ Fay