The Rhythm Of Life, Take,Blood Comments

A great poem with a meaningful message. Very uplifting. Congratulations, Alan.

Indeed, enjoy the youthful moments, congratulations on Member Poem Of The Day! Thank you so much for sharing this poem with us!

Uplifting words and wonderful to read. A lovely write to start my day.

Beautifully expressed- the flow of emotions in life vis-a-vis the flow of blood in our veins which is a part of our aging process. Thanks & Congrats, Alan.

The youth that it once gave! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Hello Alan, congratulations on your POD, an uplifting poem! Happy writing and have a good day.

In the heat of youth often we can't judge what is wrong and what is right. It dawns upon us only when we become mature in our thoughts and actions. A sound advice to savour the good times that we enjoyed when old age takes us into its grip. Congrats. 'The blood of life grows slower as we meet our dictated age Trying to remember The youth that it once gave.'...is nice. Excellent.

Great poem sir. Also, I will Aldatz remember those times when my blood flowed evenly. Thanks for sharing. Congrats! !

So remember all the goodtimes when your blood would evenly flow and don't thing of the bad times When your blood went around to slow - -Time will surely flow, blood will eventually slow down, but remembering good times will keep us happy. A wonderful poem.Congrats for being selected as the Poem of the Day.

excellent expression - like to quote last stanza So remember all the goodtimes when your blood would evenly flow and don't thing of the bad times When your blood went around to slow ///// Sadness cant not touch my heart, my soul cause I am ecstatic and delighted dweller of the earth

Congrats for this nice poem.

I agree with Poetic Dreamer that you should take another look at the syntax of some of the lines. The last line should read, 'When your blood went around too slow' However I like the content and the way the lines flow.

Alan, such a splendid poem of the day... Congrats for being chosen...10+++++ but I can’t rate due to ads😅😅😅

Fantastic poem...Inspiring to proceed with courage and whatever be the circumstances just move along..10+

CONGRATULATIONS! This is nice to see your outstanding poem as the poem of the day. Now time has passed and good times have come. Our hearts beat in unison and we feel beauty of rhythm of every beat. This poem is thought provoking as well as thoughtful...10