The Revenge Comments

Fallen into dungeon deep! Very nicely penned.

good start read my moms smiles ung man kid take no revenge its too early

beautiful and stunned writing

When I fall over into dungeon deep All the nature drying, The Heavenly star fall down darker When the lighten crying. - - -A thought provoking poem, thanks for sharing.

Nice poem with a philosophical touch and a positive message for the world. Thanks, Sakib.