Thursday, February 11, 2016

The Reveal Of Secret Locket Comments

Rating: 5.0

The day you met me in the 'Ice Cream Shop'
I feel that I was in a hundred miles away from you,
With deadly calm leaves
My heart never rings a bell to look at your face,
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Mariyam Reyshma
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Dr Antony Theodore 20 January 2020

Dream and hopping are one of the most important things in the universe. Truly it is so. thank u dear poetess. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 16 February 2016

Why I always meet you in the same ice cream shop, Spending my sweetest lifetime With a person whom I never ever wanted But you never lose your hope to catch me and hold me Tightly in your arms, ....... later how u enjoyed his presence, how the love grew and the end? ? ? mysterious ways of love and a love relationship, love, hope, desire, closeness, then doubt, disappoitnment. that is the way of life. thank you for this revealing poem. tony

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Bharati Nayak 14 February 2016

Dream, hope, love, betrayal of love, memories, both sweet and sour that have been kept in secret for years in the secret locket poured down on the piece of paper.Life is never straight.It is always a zigzag. Hope keeps life floating.Thanks for sharing the beautiful poem.

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Rajnish Manga 14 February 2016

Beautiful poem with a fine narrative running through the ups and downs of love in life. But it hurts too much when a dream turns into a nightmare. Thanks. You have become my smile / My world / You wipe my tears that fall to my cheek / Cheer up my whole day /......You have killed my feelings / My lifetime / Telling lies………………

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Abderrahmane Dakir 13 February 2016

Nice poem full of the most feeling, 'You wipe my tears that fall to my cheek Cheer up my whole day'. I liked so much. Thank you for sharing.

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