The moths worship a flame
in a circular motions,
As lovelorn stars orbit the moon
in a Venus constellation.
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Grand style....... A Milton on the rise. 'Moth - worship - flame' - a beautiful triangle. There is a point to argue with the sacrifice of moth. Sir, this moth story has always been used metaphysically to describe spiritual uprising. Wouldn't it be better if you may add some thing in this regard in the footnote.
grandiose and cosmic! this piece reminds me of Richard Wagner's Die Walküre. keep writing!
awesome poem... well written.. Krista
Congrats, Dr. Hitest. This is perhaps your best creation that I have come across so far. CP
the best of the 'poem moths' that have appeared so far around the poem hunter site flame and stay revolving around...good selection and placement of beautiful words...good rhyming...10
Marvelous..powerful poem.. 'To appease the sensual goddess of love and passions.' And moths..accepting the fate with great gratitude! Enticing..very impressive!
A great command of English and imaginative spirit here. Wonderful write! Mark