Monday, December 8, 2008

The Resurrection Of Moths Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moths worship a flame
in a circular motions,
As lovelorn stars orbit the moon
in a Venus constellation.
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
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Mark R Slaughter 31 March 2009

A great command of English and imaginative spirit here. Wonderful write! Mark

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Wali Jamali 17 December 2008

Grand style....... A Milton on the rise. 'Moth - worship - flame' - a beautiful triangle. There is a point to argue with the sacrifice of moth. Sir, this moth story has always been used metaphysically to describe spiritual uprising. Wouldn't it be better if you may add some thing in this regard in the footnote.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 16 December 2008

grandiose and cosmic! this piece reminds me of Richard Wagner's Die Walküre. keep writing!

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Colin Jeffery 10 December 2008

The Muse at its best

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awesome poem... well written.. Krista

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C. P. Sharma 09 December 2008

Congrats, Dr. Hitest. This is perhaps your best creation that I have come across so far. CP

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Reshma Ramesh 09 December 2008

superb..........write...well done

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Kesav Easwaran 09 December 2008

the best of the 'poem moths' that have appeared so far around the poem hunter site flame and stay revolving around...good selection and placement of beautiful words...good rhyming...10

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Min Sia 09 December 2008

Marvelous..powerful poem.. 'To appease the sensual goddess of love and passions.' And moths..accepting the fate with great gratitude! Enticing..very impressive!

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A wonderful story poem!

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