Sunday, July 26, 2009

The Restless Truth Comments

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Compunction so deep to regret and to weep,
Awake then asleep with a memory to keep,
The wrath of voices, and annoying noises,
A façade so senseless, with your own conclusiveness.
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Nashy Lamen
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Lorena Cruz 31 July 2009

stay strong nash... goodbye doesn't only mean goodbye... it also means a brand new start.. i guess not every love story has happy endings... i'll always stand by you..

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Julia Pascual 30 July 2009

this poem really has what you feel.. but don't blame urself..it's not your fault.. it's time'sfault.. for not giving you enough of it.. so selfish of it to get everything when things are finally going smoothly... stay strong..

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Surya . 26 July 2009

beautifull poem.well expressed. touching.i enjoyed reading this poem voted10 surya

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Obinna Eruchie 26 July 2009

A well expressed writing, Natasha.

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