Monday, June 12, 2017

The Rest Of Your Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

The frilly white edge of mattresses,
Fluffy pillows, and quilts, lines the windows,
Red ribbons and bows across the top.
'I love this one Ed; it's so soft.'
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Shannon Walker
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Etienne Charilaou 15 July 2017

Other people have wives, we have poetry! ;) I heard a doctor say that the effects of smoking will manifest 30 years later. Trust me, you wanna stay out of hospitals!

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Dr Antony Theodore 13 June 2017

This evening, ' he says, like a clown in Slacks, a white shirt and socks...also white. as she looks Around at the dated green walls, very fine portrayal of agins and its pains, suffering, mental and physical. Unwillingness to leave this life….thinking of the past. Fallling into a sort of depression and hopelessness. Thank you very much for this great poem. tony

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