Wednesday, September 12, 2018

The Rescue Ship Comments

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An small island to be hit by a deadly tsunami,
thousands of tourists on the port,
waiting for a rescue ship,
that can save them from death.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 13 September 2018

lovely sir u show I thought of chickens only me loves most her's for a toast cheers all ghosts

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 September 2018

The people still stay alive through thousands man made chaos of life on slight food!

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Luz Hanaii 13 September 2018

I like the use of metaphor; ... a forty weeks voyage to a port of soothing arms and feeding. The organizer of the pleasure trip is caressing and loving! '

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 September 2018

A wonderful poem. A vivid portrayal of how life is all about. Sometimes we see chaos, peace and care all at the same time. The many colors of life. A great write beautifully crafted and well executed.10

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Khalid Saifullah 12 September 2018

A thoughtful poem on life.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

When deadly Tsunami hits this is really very sad and this brings destruction. In such case we cannot plan for a pleasure trip. But we can proceed for sending a rescue ship. This poem is sensitive and thought provoking. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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