Thursday, April 20, 2006

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Afterwards
She knew no love
Her heart became frozen
Unable to be melted
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Rachael Hardy
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Bancroft Boreland 08 September 2011

i like this poem but why didn't you reunite the two lovers? in line 26 you have(there love shattered) , should be (their love shattered)

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Isaac Helms 21 April 2006

a grest poem like mos thing in life dont have happy endings Isaac

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Kev Elmer 20 April 2006

...Really nice poem, but things get better with time. Very very good read! Sad ending tho: (

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