The Remains Comments
This is where nightmares live
deep in the mind,
unshakeable
and sometimes true.
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A different kind of poem for Sally Plumb- about alienation and emptiness it seems, and even nightmares and she writes about it with poetic grace but I miss the clever charm Sally is so quick and consistent with!
Being confronted with death isn’t very charming. Nice try. Best wishes. Sally
Lasting, as memory does, I stand in the vacuum you've left behind, drawing thoughts from nowhere, wonderingwho I am..... beautiful
Not one of my best, a poor attempt I would admit. Thanks fo your interest. Sally
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9/3/2025 2:14:27 AM # 1.0.0
Excellent poem! I really enjoyed the reading - a 10
Thanks for your interest, Carl. It is much appreciated.