Saturday, January 10, 2009

The Reluctant Father Comments

Rating: 3.7

Relationship quakes with bitter aches
I gave it all but lost to lust
My heart is shut… emotions dulled
Never again! ! ! … I moan in pain.
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Fred Omorogbe
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Joscelyn Alderdice 26 January 2009

Beautiful, just beautiful. Many men go through the same thing. Well done!

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Cody Passey 16 January 2009

Awesome! ! ! true story? ? my favorite ive yet read on the site encore

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C. P. Sharma 16 January 2009

..... burdensome loyalities...

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Jim Norausky 15 January 2009

Wow, this is powerful poem. Thanks for sharing. Jim

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