Saturday, January 20, 2018

The Relationship Of Pains Comments

Rating: 4.9

You like one I also like one
But she likes a foolish third one
Well she deserves a fool
Good friends at the pool!
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 September 2022

Absolutely a brilliant poem sir..... liked this poem.5 stars.

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Loke Kok Yee 29 January 2018

A third one will be the better choice, considering the two that you have shown here. Thanks for the fun sir.

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Indira Renganathan 22 January 2018

You have great sense of humour which reflects in each of your limericks...one more fun-poem...yet indeed a good friendship poem...thank you Akhtar

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 January 2018

Let us look for a wise someone......enjoyed reading the poem............................10

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Tom Allport 20 January 2018

a humorous poem of choices? , , , , , , , , , , , , , well penned Akhtar

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Khalida Bano Ali 20 January 2018

Enjoyed this funny poem.

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