all would-be poets, take note!
proofread that so-called poem you just wrote!
those who aspire for more Famous Days
please steer clear of these clichés:
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Very creative, creating a poem consisting of what should not be in one. Intresting angle.
All I can say is 'amen.' So true. So true. That said, YOUR poem affected me profoundly.
Excellent poem! I think I'd rather get a rejection slip than a rejected organ. - chuck
Now that's a great performance piece, Jake...would catch the attention of any audience. Of course, you'd have to 'follow that'...
you both remind me of Statler & Waldorf...only they were funnier. warmly, AJH
But the REAL question is: Do we need YOU to tell us any of this? I for one am slipping my rejection slip for you under your door. You can mark on it with your red felt pen. Please consider my remarks here as tongue-in-cheek as yours were meant to be. H
Bloody brilliant, will stock up on highlighter pens for my own very painful howlers: -)
Brilliant poem, and amazing poet, so relatable