Wednesday, January 12, 2005

The Rejection Slip Comments

Rating: 3.8

all would-be poets, take note!
proofread that so-called poem you just wrote!
those who aspire for more Famous Days
please steer clear of these clichés:
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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler
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aya zakaria 26 September 2024

Brilliant poem, and amazing poet, so relatable

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Robert Howard 20 June 2007

Today the top 500, tomorrow the world!

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Sandra Osborne 06 March 2007

Very creative, creating a poem consisting of what should not be in one. Intresting angle.

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Siona Doyle-McLaughlin 13 July 2006

All I can say is 'amen.' So true. So true. That said, YOUR poem affected me profoundly.

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Chuck Audette 02 June 2006

Excellent poem! I think I'd rather get a rejection slip than a rejected organ. - chuck

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Mike Finley 03 May 2006

We have been warned.

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kenneth william snow 10 March 2005

Brilliant poem...excellent rhymes

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Michael Shepherd 16 February 2005

Now that's a great performance piece, Jake...would catch the attention of any audience. Of course, you'd have to 'follow that'...

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Michael Shepherd 01 February 2005

so you do read my poems after all?

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Rev. Dr. A. Jacob Hassler 27 January 2005

you both remind me of Statler & Waldorf...only they were funnier. warmly, AJH

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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 January 2005

But the REAL question is: Do we need YOU to tell us any of this? I for one am slipping my rejection slip for you under your door. You can mark on it with your red felt pen. Please consider my remarks here as tongue-in-cheek as yours were meant to be. H

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Andrew Fincham 12 January 2005

I'm with the Elf. If only proofreading would help...

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Lenchen Elf 12 January 2005

Bloody brilliant, will stock up on highlighter pens for my own very painful howlers: -)

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