The Reign Of Thornbush Poem by Aloo Denish Obiero

The Reign Of Thornbush

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One day, the trees sought a king,
A ruler their hopes would bring,
In the land where trees stood tall,
But in their quest, a cautionary call.

To the olive tree, they first appealed,
'Be our king, ' they fervently revealed,
But the olive, revered and grand,
Declined, oil slipping through its hand.

'Shall I forsake my oil's divine glow,
That honors gods and humans so,
To rule over trees, in earthly domain?
No, my essence, I shall not profane.'

The fig tree, adorned with fruits so sweet,
Was beckoned to take the royal seat,
But it, too, refused their noble plea,
Preserving its purpose, fruitfully free.

'Shall I surrender my succulent prize,
The taste of delight that satisfies,
To govern the trees, in earthly embrace?
No, my harvest, I shall not erase.'

Next, the vine was summoned to sway,
'Come, be our king, ' the trees did say,
Yet, it, too, declined the sovereign plea,
Sparing its nectar's celestial decree.

'Shall I relinquish the wine I bestow,
That warms both gods and humans, aglow,
To rule over trees, in this mortal realm?
No, my elixir, I shall not o'erwhelm.'

Finally, they turned to the thornbush bare,
Desperate for a king, in their despair,
It offered shelter, with a warning clear,
A choice to embrace or face fire's sear.

'If you crown me king, your sovereign guide,
Seek refuge within my shade, wholly inside,
But reject this, and witness the fire,
Consuming cedars in a dreadful pyre! '

Too late did the trees learn a lesson profound,
As do good men who stay silent, unbound,
Choosing passivity in public affairs, they bear,
To be ruled by the malevolent, a price unfair.

So rise, oh virtuous souls, heed the plea,
Engage in the struggle, let your actions decree,
Take up the mantle, courageously embrace the fight,
For evil triumphs, only when good turns a blind sight.

The Reign Of Thornbush
Monday, June 12, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: evil,rule,leadership,trees,politics,Good
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Denise, this is a wonderful story, you have painted in poetry. And the poem too is beautiful with is nice rhyme and rhythm

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Denish Aloo 15 June 2023

Thanks immensely Menon, for the motivating compliment. I appreciate.

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

'Unni', his name is Denish, not Dennis (a boy's name in U.S.) nor Denise, a girl's name here in U.S.! But Unni DOES use a fine alliteration, and, like me, appreciates the rhyming, and the story.

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

I sort of giggled at this line. It WAS a manly-giggle, though I think I've never heard of such a giggle before now. THIS LINE: 'Declined, oil slipping through its hand.'

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

'Preserving its purpose, fruitfully free.' WOW! TWO alliterations in 1 little line! That's FINE! !

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

five stars and to my favorites. ; bri

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

last stanza: I see you apparently altered 'blind eye' to 'blind sight'. I've heard of 'hindsight' but not 'blind sight'. So be it. And, on that note, I bid you goodnight & FIVE STARS. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

Well, well, well. I now see 'evil, rule, leadership, trees, politics' and 'Good' listed as topics. Trees have been politicized in stanza 10!

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

Yay! ! ! Spoken like a BORN MONARCH, a KING of trees for a land where trees stand tall. : )

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Bri Edwards 30 June 2023

stanza 8: Are 'we' talking about 'Fever tree / Naivasha thorn tree': 'one of the fastest-growing thorn-tree species in Africa. It can withstand lopping'. Ok, if the 'sausage tree' won't SERVE, I vote to elect, unanimously, the thorn tree! ! ! !

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