I touch the sky and your passing clouds in vain
Because there was no any gratitude shown.
They just hit my peak and run away.
Sun, Moon, Stars and Angels they all mock and pass remarks.
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Your title is beautiful and evocative. This is indeed an elegy worthy of the name. It is the sad songs that are long remembered.10/10.
This evocative piece certainly does justice to your Sri Lankan singer's words. When duality is gone and we understand that we are all one, only then will we experience true freedom. Beautifully written poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥