Wednesday, January 28, 2009

The Refiner's Fire Comments

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The Master Swordsmith starts
with a dull, jagged lump of steel.
He heats it in a forge until it glows bright red.
Then he hammers it on the anvil,
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Jon Ojala
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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 02 February 2009

Comparing life and the lump of steel transforming into a thing of exquisite beauty is a unique idea very well worded. The Refiner's Fire is a great meaningful metaphor here. Good work, Jon. Regards Naseer

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