Wednesday, March 2, 2016

The Reels Comments

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Sometimes,
in the morning I sleep like a log
dreams hazy,
as I wander through the fog
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Nika McGuin
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Daniel Brick 03 March 2016

You capture the elusive quality of these SOMETIMES experiences. Usually we're left only with a vague feeling, a lingering flavor but not the whole impact. That's exactly what your recorded in this poem - it's a model on HOW TO prepare to remember. I like your precise description in stanza 2 on preparing your to be receptive. Because that's the key: inner receptiveness. And the third stanza shows that interior world. It's uncanny how you make these fleeting experiences seem real.

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