The Red Velvet Mite Comments

I can see, I can feel, and I can think I have beautiful words that I can ink Words are the mirror of my thoughts Come so suddenly in the mental droughts - A very lovely poem, full of fun and humor... I love this word-picture of a rainy-day experience.a 10++++++ Perdita

(cont.) ... more favorite lines: [and, yes, it IS beautiful! ! ! the mite, i might add.] Your beauty is enough as it's mental, Inspire me my heavenly sweetheart Could I paint you but I lack this art! : .................i guess your writing art is sufficient here. to MyPoemList. bri :)

favorite lines so far: [and more favorites soon enough, but i'm puzzled by your use of flirt] Walking in the mud for an inspiration See a red velvet mite the crawling ruby The vagabond beauty like a naughty baby ...............and your dwell? ? (continued) ...

drought drout/ noun plural noun: droughts a prolonged period of abnormally low rainfall; a shortage of water resulting from this. synonyms: dry spell, lack of rain, shortage of water this year's drought was devastating to cotton growers a prolonged absence of something specified. he ended a five-game hitting drought archaic thirst. (continued) ....

It is a brilliant write on red velvet mite having haunting expression with nice collocation in couplet form. I appreciate this poem. Enjoyed with photo provided. Thank u Akhtar sir.

A beautiful poem. When you look for an inspiration just look around.