The Red Tiny Bag Full Of Promises! Comments

A heart wrenching poem on the invisible hands of fate. The last stanza sums up the grim tragedy and the consequences that follows.

lovely piece. wet eyes are lovely! !

Very poignant theme and touching narration.

Life can end any time leaving kith and kin helpless. A point brought out with great force in the poem.

A poignant write that says a lot about life n its strange whims. The ways of life are often inexplicable. Very heart-touching write.

When the bread winner of the family is gone, there arises a vacuum which no one else can fill. This hardworking man has been the pillar of his family, the strength and support of his wife and a loving father to his children! The empty bag which was once filled with small surprises is now a symbol of the emptiness that has crept over their orphaned lives... A very touching write!

Another sad story, another touching poem, description of painful moments of the conjugal life.

A very meaningful and touching poem displaying a cruel punishment bestowed on the innocent children by their fate.

Verily, things attached to incidental happenings remain as a memory forever