Thursday, September 15, 2005
The Red Silken Dress Comments
Rating: ★3.8
There's a red silken dress
Hanging up on my wall,
With cascades of lush fabric
Swaying in sinuous folds,
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Max Reif
05 November 2005
The image at the end becomes very powerful because you've prepared us. Quite an intense journey you take us on. (a couple small things-'virgins' and 'womans', near poem's middle, should have apostraphes; 'it's' shouldn't.
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8/1/2025 4:27:12 PM # 1.0.0
Me again! This was a real tear jerker, the journey of life... Such use of language, i was really drawn in, could really visualise it all: -D