Friday, July 18, 2008

The Red-Rose Wilted Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sitting here watching the storm clouds roll by,
Gazing at the midnight-celestial heaven, hoping…wishing,
That you, though many miles and light-years away,
Are spying on the same falling star,
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Baby Blue
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Eyan Desir 20 April 2009

Beautiful Poems great words So much of a soft touch Much better than my work

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Vampire Heart 22 March 2009

lovely poem, the last line is very beautiful it increases the sorrow within the poem, nice write

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Viola Grey 19 July 2008

I love the last line here...it takes all the sadness and gives it reason yet to smile...lovely piece.

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