Sunday, September 25, 2016

The Red Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

The rays,
Bright, sharp and straight,
Strike that glass-
Coated with the black
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Partha Pratim Goswami
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Edward Kofi Louis 28 November 2016

Glimpses! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gandalf The Grey 25 September 2016

Duality of love and life is seen here-at the first glance it seems to be love poem, but if read carefully then one can visualize that repentance of one's fault is depicted in the poem.Again it ends with a hope and self reformation from grief-nice work overall.

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