Monday, June 13, 2011

The Rebirth Comments

Rating: 5.0

The making of myself and I
I have seen it all
All but worthless
worthless to my purpose
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Heyyou Boy 25 January 2012

A really wonderful poem full of wisdom. Spoken like a poet. great job

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Aqeb Benazir 15 July 2011

Amazingly well done! ! it's great the way you moved from one line to the next with the words continuing...makes you want more! ! this would make a nice song though!

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Paul Nkensen Obirigya 16 June 2011

Impressive, true believers dominating...is what we truly need....great thoughts n dreams.. Love dis..too

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 13 June 2011

Nice poem. Great sentiments. The poem is rich in imagery and style. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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