The making of myself and I
I have seen it all
All but worthless
worthless to my purpose
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Amazingly well done! ! it's great the way you moved from one line to the next with the words continuing...makes you want more! ! this would make a nice song though!
Impressive, true believers dominating...is what we truly need....great thoughts n dreams.. Love dis..too
Nice poem. Great sentiments. The poem is rich in imagery and style. Great write indeed. I give it 10/10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.
A really wonderful poem full of wisdom. Spoken like a poet. great job