Saturday, July 13, 2019

The Rebirth Of Pink Roses Comments

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I reverse the curse of danger
Somewherein between needled vine and array of leaves
For I place my soul to lay, to bloom, to soften the eyes
There is the rebirth of pink roses, told by the wind
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Unwritten Soul
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Mj Lemon 09 September 2020

Such a great birthday wish! Rabbie Burns, I am certain, would find joy in this verse!

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Akhtar Jawad 14 January 2020

My scent will lingers to remind you to remind you...................to remind my intentions to attract you towards beauty that leads to love.

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Bri Edwards 25 December 2019

stanza 3, line 2: i don't know if you 'want' " breathe" or " breath" . they ARE two different words. i used to mix them up. You were/are lucky to have a friend whom you apparently like/liked a lot. May the odor of 'pink roses' always be at hand aka available to you when you want/need it. bri :)

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Muhammad Ali 22 November 2019

Very pleasant and fragrant, poem and thoughts. May the rose and rise be always blossom. Amen

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Unwritten Soul 28 November 2019

Yes this poem was using pink roses as the paper hahaha joking! Thanks and Amen

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Lyn Paul 18 July 2019

Happy belated birthday.. I love the amazing meaning in your words and how the sweetest, simplest thing gives you pleasure. Thank you

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Unwritten Soul 24 July 2019

Thank you Lyn.... You always sweet and kind to me, sorry for late reply..I think birthday is about thankful and grateful for what we have....and i grateful for having great friends and people like u..and all cool people that always kind to me..thanks Lyn

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