Friday, April 14, 2017

The Rebirth Of Our Savior Comments

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Behold this world, sunk in darkness:
Once used to be a sign of tranquilness.
Oh! I wait for a hero who passed long ago...
To reborn, and destroy evil and let go his ego!
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Dr Antony Theodore 14 October 2017

Like how a single ant can't be noticed, But when its colony moves, we fear them undoubted. your examples are revealing. vaibhav liked your meditations on God and the saviour...........and the rebirth of the saviour to save the mankind from hatred. a great poem of hope. thank u dear poet Vaibhav

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Vaibhav Simha 14 October 2017

Thank you, Sir. Can you rate my other poems, your honest opinion would be greatly appreciated.

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Jaya Das 14 April 2017

This one is again a hopeful poetry.....well executed n i am going to read more....please keep writing....your poems are really good Cheers Jaya😊

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Vaibhav Simha 14 April 2017

Thank you, Jaya, for your encouragement. Let us be hopeful that one day, the entire world shall be under flag, the flag of unity! You can check out my other poem, 'Forget the Sword, Forget the Shield'. With regards, Vaibhav.

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