Monday, October 27, 2008

The Rebel Angel, 'satan' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Yes I am rebel angel Iblis
with my invincible code triple six.
Like a robot rebelling against his master
I have revolted against my heavenly pater.
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
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Fiona Davidson 07 April 2009

Excellent write...draws the reader on throughout with it's capturing story....10

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Sebastine Humaemo 26 November 2008

wow a great work....can sense ur poetic style in each line....keep going...thanks for sharing....10..

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 November 2008

So you're the Iblis, fighting Satan for uncertainties, shortcomings and evil deeds.Your poem has captured the flow of tranquilitty words enriched with Satanice verses. Great piece indeed! ! !

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what a lovely poem so pure thank you for sharing

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