The Reawakened Butterfly Comments

I have to say, Vincey, I was expecting a rather more fable-like message here, especially after the expulsion of the re-made caterpillar from the insect community. But so what? You've composed an entertaining, well-rhymed and well-worded narrative here! ! Good you! A few spelling glitches here and there, one or two rhymes to tidy, and 'But something else happened instead' possibly to be re-thought. But still a very strong piece, in my view. Love, Gina.

A beautifully portrayed loving poetic story. I like it very much Vincent, so much so, it must be a favourite for me. It has given me such a grin. Thank you. Happily in fluttering heart bliss. 10 shooting stars from Tai