Saturday, May 2, 2009

* The Reasoning Apparatus Comments

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man is not bad
atleast according to him
man is not evil
atleast according to him
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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan
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Krishnarasa Seshadri 27 February 2010

How true! we reason our bad into good! the irony of it all makes one laugh! nice thought!

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Sathyanarayana M V S 16 May 2009

Man can twist his reasoning, imagination apparatus to suit his needs and convert good into bad and bad into good. Very good thought. But this poem needs to be a little readjusted to make this diction more clear.

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Eyan Desir 07 May 2009

Good write dear poet

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Carl Harris 06 May 2009

The first two verses of this poem are fine, samanyan, but you lost me with that third verse which makes no sense to me and is completely contradictory to the first two verses. You may want to rephrse that third verse so that it is more in agreement with the first two verse, or if it is to be contradictory, as least make it far more readable and understandable. Carl.

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Carl Harris 06 May 2009

The first two verses of this poem are fine, samanyan, but you lost me with that third verse which makes no sense to me and is completely contradictory to the first two verses. You may want to rephrse that third verse so that it is more in agreement with the first two verse, or if it is to be contradictory, as least make in far more readable and understandable. Carl.

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Lynda Robson 06 May 2009

A very cleverly written piece, by the voice of reason, thanks, 10 Lynda xx

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Ency Bearis 06 May 2009

interesting thought..a meaningful one..

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Sadiqullah Khan 05 May 2009

The thought is great, with streight simple expression. Every one will agree.10

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Joseph Poewhit 05 May 2009

True people always create reasons for something. Not concerned with right or wrong, if they even can determine that.

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Vidi Writes 05 May 2009

Thats why one has to stop reasoning And start meditating... Reasoning... Well explained poetically. How long one can prove self before others? ? When others respect the self... no need of this apparatus When others discard... one gets handicapped to use this apparatus. Good subject. Good Title. Thank you.

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~ Jon London ~ 05 May 2009

What we do, whether it good or bad ia out of choice, and out of the wrong choices the human race is still suffering today.....great piece

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Louis Rams 04 May 2009

WHEN THERE IS A CHOICE, THEN THERE COULD BE NO BAD.

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 04 May 2009

Dear Samanyan, This is a good little poem. Man can be a demon or a deity. Good or evil both resides in him. It all depends on how the reasoning is used by him before going for a good deed or a bad one. Thanks for sharing -Rajkumar

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C. P. Sharma 04 May 2009

good poem, Samanayana. CP

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Reshma Ramesh 04 May 2009

great write..............well penned

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Indira Renganathan 04 May 2009

Reasoning is a natural quality of humans and experimenting also a natural one where only humans hop over the limit to do wrong investigations...well done

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Naidz Ladia 03 May 2009

reasons are the only weapon to defend ourselves clearly..it may be an apparatus or it could be a material on how to be defensive or any....words are the contents of reasons, it may be good or it might be bad? ..it depends on how to drive the reasons..nice poem dear...each individual has his own way on determining good and bad reasons...reasoning may be a lie or an alibi...but take note...eyes express more than the reasons found in mouth...eyes are more expressive thatn mouth, , , eyes could not speak but could identify whether the reason is clearly good or absolutely lies...mouth could speak both truth and lies but eyes, express only one expression....that is either the truth or the lies...so, , reasoning apparatus might not be detected thru mouths but it is precisely be detected in eyes...A REASONING APPARATUS, is a gift to us...we should utilize this in a good way..naizz

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 03 May 2009

Absolutely true it is circumstances that make good or bad...............Good Write......

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Ramesh T A 03 May 2009

Reasoning is God given apparatus for evolving himself to super manhood but its selfish use has led him to sadness....!

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ye. those are some very true words.. the deciaion lies in man and his God given, , Free will...

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