Tuesday, May 26, 2009

The Reason Comments

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Why can’t I find the words?
I need more words to finish.
I have to finish what I’ve started,
Otherwise, it will all be for nothing.
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Rachel Brewer
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Sara Tehrani 26 May 2009

I really like this poem, its got alot of hidden humour in it that is enjoyable to read. I can really relate to it, as ive always been known as the person that never finishes her sentence, as ive lacked in confidence to say the words i want to say. Its as though you live all your life just so you can be a completed story. I think its very original. weldone :) be cool if you could have a read on my poems 'The Path' or/and ' One name' and let me know what u think. Thanx :)

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