The Realm Of Rhyme And Rhythm Comments

Yes indeed, rhymes cast a magic spell, if they fit in so well, if not, I guess it is better to be rhyme-less.

A rich refreshing river of rhymes!

simply amazing - it keep on rhyming - it keep on entertaining....

Love the exuberance and imagination in this tribute. I'm glad you celebrate rhyme and rhythm, Zaynub. If some say rhyming poetry is old hat - i say it's new hat! It's deep in the human soul to rhyme and sing like a bird! For a while I tried to fight the rhyme in my poems as blank verse seemed to be 'modern' but now I'm proud to rhyme.

Rhyming, however, is rife with pitfalls. Some of your stanzas are terrific, others clumsy. I say it is better to write in blank verse and take away all the tripwires!

Absolutely beautifu, Zayanubl! ! Cent percent correct too! I don't know how many times I have read Alfred Noyes' Highway Man! For this great write you deserve a10

He he He, you certainly have rhythm, though I don't think its the be all of poetry, stylistically its fabulist and your never gratuitous. A lovely cheerful read, filled with sentiment but not to sugary. Well done!

A nice, whimsical little piece.

wow you have this rhyme and rhyming sense well endowed.....

Reading this poem made me feel good it was uplifting well done great rhyme and rhythm

Bravo! This is wonderful. I agree with you. It's like dancing - you feel the rhythm and you can't stop. Although I have read beautiful non-rhyming poems, too. Sometimes I wish I could write like that but I can't. But we appreciate it all, don't we? Words written from the heart touch us like nothing else can.

Well-constructed and beautifully rhymed verse.Loved a lot.