Wednesday, February 27, 2019

The Realm Of Pretend Comments

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When reality chills me to the bone,
The embers of make-believe are fanned,
Sitting on my garden bench alone,
Tightly I cling to a phantom hand
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Lora Colon
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Glen Kappy 13 March 2019

you remind me in this one, lora, of the importance of remembering, of how it is foundational in the bible (in passover and other feasts, in christian communion) , in keeping us steady and sane when dealing with reality's chills. it's not idle or childish but essential for our well-being. -glen

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Bri Edwards 07 March 2019

this is one of your best! 'pretending' is useful, AND cheaper than going to a honky-tonk! some favorite lines for me [plus last stanza, esp. wend/pretend]: " Yet when my eyes absorb dawn's first light, Sadly, I never find him near me" to MyPoemList. bri :)))) you never cease to amuse me with your humorous poems

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Lorraine Colon 07 March 2019

I was going to pretend I never saw this message from you, but actually it's almost complimentary. Or maybe now YOU'RE pretending! ! Whatever. I don't like honky-tonks. Give me a tango bar any day.... or night.

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