Friday, May 29, 2009

The Real You Comments

Rating: 5.0

wow, a whole new you,
i never thought i see,
so shy to show your true self,
i wonder why,
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mona martinez
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yeah, we should! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Brishti Mazumdar 06 June 2009

shouldn't you show the real you in the begining? No, my dear...in that case this world would be barren of any relationship... ...liked your poem...10+...Brishti Mazumdar

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oki............. nice poem.. mona...

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 June 2009

'we should show who we are, sooner or later it will come out, shouldn't you show the real you in the begining? ' Beautifully penned, I love the last 3 lines most. 10+++ with joy.

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Brishti Mazumdar 02 June 2009

No dear, if you show the real you in the beginning, you will have to live a deserted life.Good poem....

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Saadat Tahir 30 May 2009

shouldn't you show the real you in the begining? bingo...absolutely nice write cheers

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