The Real Problem Comments
The real problem is not that I left you to ignore you,
or entirely vanish from your life.
It's because you want to stay,
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Very emotionally charged poem. But there is more to it. When the poet says, "You have won", it is the win of the narrator she is hinting at. The narrator has endured the rejection and the fingers pointing at her calling her lunatic. Yes! She has endured it. Congratulations
A poignant love poem written with clarity of thought and mind; very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
Thanks for the strong opinion and thoughts on my work, much appreciated!
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8/2/2025 9:28:00 PM # 1.0.0
i hope you will learn to love again... dont let him win