The Real People Comments

A nice historical poem about how ideals as formed and sound in theory a great idea, at first they work well and bloom like a flower, only for the flower to be choked by mans the weeds of mans desire and greed. This is one of your best yet, in my opinion some of the rhyming words could be a little less forced, although they do help to carry the poem along. nice work with a good message all the best vincent