The Real Of Me! Comments

Now I look younger and greener than real I am. I hide all my pain, ugliness, hatred, anger, selfishness, Behind my beautiful mask of smile.-a very nice poem has been written-10

A marvelous poem that depicts realities of life. An honest write beautifully crafted. So inspiring.10++++

All well said in the last stanza! ! ...a very great work..thank you very much for this superb poem and your visit and comment Geetha

Every mask will fall. Every life will have meanings. You are real.

Mam, this is a wonderful poem. I really like it.

Beautiful poem eloquently expressed. The most important quality that a person should posses is smile. Let me quoted... I present myself As cheerful and pleasant one With a friendly smile. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.

a poem that unlike a mirror shows a true reflection of ones inner beautiful self? ....well penned

You have put across quite beautifully the psychology of a young lady who would hide her negative points and show off and highlight her positive ones- her charming smile being on the top. Thanks. Now I look younger and greener than real I am. I hide all my pain, ugliness, hatred, anger, selfishness, Behind my beautiful mask of smile.

Looking at the beautiful image of another as his own.Human nature very well described in the poem.Thanks for sharing.

I like to remaim with my real aspects of my life. Moreover it is tough for me to conceal. Thanks for sharing. Regards.

great..the real of me..you are a poet and that's the real of you. keep writing mam

Simply unbelievably inspiring as I read these words again. Love you Geetha you light up everyone's heart and I am sure you would light up a room. You are blessed but we are blessed so much more. xx

Great write, Geetha-ji. We can see all the pain and anguish even despite the make-up. (10)

Beautiful one mam...Beautiful mask of smile..... Felt it mam. Deep thoughts.......Keep writing mam. I enjoy your poems...Thanks for sharing. Thanks for your evaluation of my poem, evolution from previous karmic cycle...

A beautiful poem, Geetha. It expresses the thoughts with eloquence

Your expression of truth reveals the poetess in you.Loved reading it.

Very beautifully expressed poem. something which can stay with one's heart long after he read it.

Don't ever tell, How beautiful her life is.... All you see me is through Beautiful mask of smile! ... nice lins delight to read and silently lead the belief you hold very bold

Geetha you look so beautiful in your photograph and that is because you Are! ! ! ! Congratulations on being in the Top 500. So pleased for YOU

Dear Geetha.. Such inspirational words! A beautiful poem... loved it and just cannot say enough. You are an inspiration to so many. x