The real me
The real me is hidden
The real me won't let anyone see
The real me dreads sleep
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Guess what? Alicia, the real you is fortunately filtering through your writings and this one, well penned and poignant is proof of what I am saying! Don't be afraid to be what you really are and let the World know without any disdain or shame! Keep inspiring the World with more of such talented and thought provoking writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...
The real you will escape. There is only shame in keeping yourself locked up. The repetition used emphasizes that the real you is and always will be there. Nice work.