Sunday, October 16, 2011

The Real Me Comments

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The real me 
The real me is hidden
The real me won't let anyone see
The real me dreads sleep
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Alex Medina 23 June 2012

The real you will escape. There is only shame in keeping yourself locked up. The repetition used emphasizes that the real you is and always will be there. Nice work.

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Romeo Della Valle 13 November 2011

Guess what? Alicia, the real you is fortunately filtering through your writings and this one, well penned and poignant is proof of what I am saying! Don't be afraid to be what you really are and let the World know without any disdain or shame! Keep inspiring the World with more of such talented and thought provoking writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City...

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