Saturday, November 18, 2006

The Real Me Comments

Rating: 4.8

Who told you that I'm AJ,
and everything is fine?
My dear lies are truth
and no one walks a straight line.
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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 18 November 2006

A poet needs no mask. They impression themselves through the Mind's Eye and their astute sense of dictional organization, which all come from th'main vein & axis of th' human lifeline....The Heart...but i think you knew that when you wrote this piece...Shock value has it's poignant merit....Heart value? ..P R I C E L E S S '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''{F. j. R }

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Prasanna Kumari 18 November 2006

behind all those mask i can feel the real you...a great poet with true feeling

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Amy C 18 November 2006

great poem, i really enjoyed it -x-

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