The Real Me Comments

I love lines 4 and 5; 'my thought patterns something...' I simply do; overall great retrospective poem. I can relate to the old soul in young body theme.

The demonization of the own personality is an intersting literary device :) you use it quite well. Good write, real you ;)

Don't be too hard on yourself young man, you are an excellent poet, good write 10 Lynda xx

10/10 for being v contemporary