Thursday, June 25, 2015

The Real Her Comments

Rating: 4.5

She walks around the place,
with a fake smile upon her face.
She looks at her wrists and her cuts are hidden,
as she knows that self harming is forbidden.
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Naomi Louise Short
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Chinedu Dike 28 June 2015

A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned with insight. Most people hide their tribulations because experience has thoughts them that hiding their problems with dignity is better than exposing them. Bottom line: No one cares. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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