The Real Fruit Comments

This simple poem gives a good feeling. Let the birds and squirrels continue to sing and play in mirth in your poetry. It doesn't matter if the Rambutan doesn't bear fruit. God bless.

Very Nice poem Nash..

love poem! I like it.

Sweet poem. Real tree lover.

Loved it, the poem is filled with nostalgia and i love the way you defined nature! These days people don't value the trees and shrubs, you are very unique poet..keep up ur works! Do check mines! :)

Dear Nash Thomas I love your poem, The Real Fruit The tree is the real fruit of nature gifted by God not only its fruits. if we hunmans plant the tree for nture not for its fruits, it would be better just like if we do somthing without any purposes we will feel better and if we allways think about its results we will feel so sad because we are so eager to get its fruits and then we just forget that its process is so bueatuful as the tree's growing in your peom. That is The Real Fruit. Sophy Chen in China

Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

.............you painted a beautiful picture of a beloved tree....I have never heard of this type of tree....I must research it.....sure it must be lovely....

The tree is a symbol of the beauty of nature the joy of birds singing from it's branches and squirrels playing within it's great soul that reaches out to your soul to be moved by it's glory of giving such a wealth of pleasure and contentment! Beautiful write!

Trees even if they are not bearing fruits in time have its own advantages to nature and human beings.Also to the birds, squirrel like species which are nature's own gifts and contribution to the world. Looking the branches of trees and enjoying its shade and new leaves is an experience and entertainment when there is time to do so and in fact it is the most interesting aspect of nature. The trees are also recharging water to the earth and their service to the mother earth is another advantage. Liking such a tree by the poet is beautifully narrated in the poem and it is a total success and poem likes in that spirit.

We need trees not only for the fruits but for many other reasons too, A nice write..................10

All are filled with joy, We aren't like to cut the tree, For, want of firewood. Even if, we are short of it. A nicely composed poem with a direct message.I enjoyed reading it.Keep sharing Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

It's a nice poem with a pretty message of preserving all nature's stuffs for good. I loved it. Thanks.

All are filled with joy, We aren't like to cut the tree, For, want of firewood. Even if, we are short of it... nice lines..10 taht is beauty of nature you make sure that there is no cutting of frees even if we are getting firewood free

Nash, this is sincere, melancholic, appreciative, and leaves lots of images to think about. I like this. Keep on writing.