We were standing alone in front of the school,
Where the kids would turn into adults soon,
Never ending useless home works and tests,
Projects, assignments and emotional issues,
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ur poem is a reality, but yes slowly things are changing...nowadays mothers name is also considered mandatory in your graduation certificates etc.....but ur poem is very nice as it highlights the fact...the truth behind mothers emotions for her children, she teaches, she nurtures, then one day they leave her n go for distance education or job, then mother has to just keep waiting with phone in hand with her empty womb.....very nice poem, liked it!
we, the mothers are left alone, no no, Mother is first, next comes father. Twameva mata cha pita twameva, mother, mother sweet mother, no substitute of mother, at present everywhere name of mother and father are being put together. Mother is the earth, father is the sky. we stand on earth and look to the sky , In ancient days the identity are being given through mother and it is but nature and natural. good poem. congratulation.10
No one objects for the mother's name to be added to the names of children. In the past the womenfolk were confined to household work. But now in most of the houses, men are doing the same. you have not written how the men sacrifice to give good education to children. But you have neatly elucidated the idea of your poem.