The Ray Of Hope Comments

The power of human ambition to reach God's blessing and i shall remeber this poem as how we can sincerely submit ourselves just for HIS forgivesness. What ever religion we choose, we choose to submit ourself to be come human and not ungreatful creature which just caused destruction within. Devotion and faith shall mend and clear all the darkeness in our soul and your poem must bring back at least one human to become real servant of GOD. Excellent.

what a wonderful poem it makes me think of shakespierre, it nice i love the way that you chossen your words

Wonderful message of hope and devotion. I really like it very much. Thanks for this fantastic write

I agree with Geeta's comments totally & can't say much more than she did; as she covered all the main points you were portraying in this beautiful poem of yours. Thanks for sharing & I also give it a 10. Spiritsong

What a wonderful concept moulded into a beautiful prayer with a touch of poetry! Repetition of: Day after day, I dropp in your lap O lord! The radiant flowers of thy prayers, And I can see the Ray of Hope for the growth and success in thy care . in all four verses reiterates the fact that hope is always alive. The key words here are: peace, love, relationship, work, people, and freedom. These are the main elements that make the world go round. Once you are optimistic about acquiring all of these, what more do you really need in this world? Poems such as these are certainly 'the ray of hope' to illuminate the darkness that seems to engulf the world today. A 10+++++++ absolutely.

Hm...amazing perspective...ur view is so pure, the way u arrange it, so beautiful like roses petals, i mean it beautifully repeated but deeply to express your view 'in a layer'...love it so much...God, u always show me the ray of hope! thanks for refresh my mind...keep doing great thing..

Very well written, Amrit