The Ravishing Rain Comments

Today I'm placing this Poem's title and the author's name, AND some comment on poem by me, into my Sept. '22 'showcase of poems' which is in my list of poems 'written by me'. ;) bri

Today I'm placing this Poem's title and the author's name, AND some comment on poem by me, into my Sept. '22 'showcase of poems' which is in my list of poems 'written by me'. ;) bri

To my favorites now. : ) bri

I must have been in a hurry with my last commenting. I esp.l liked this line: 'Till it's said to be raining cats and dogs or more realistically, fishes and frogs! ' And I'll use it at next showcase if I remember to do so.

The Rain in Spain' is a song from the musical My Fair Lady' I enjoyed this 5-stars-worth. bri ;)

Rain is alluring, the sound of a rainstorm is like the ancient choir of the planet singing. an enchanting read.

Beautiful images. A well penned poem

The earth loves the rain, as it is the source of all plant life, and thus all other life on this sphere. Very pleasing poem.

A fantastic poem.

as Kim Barney points out--a joyful wordplay going on in this very introspective look at God's rain---top marks and I faved this

I keenly follow all poems composed on rain! This is a superb composition. Liked the lines, 'the drizzle converts into a heavy downpour as thunders bellow and thunders roar as rivers swell and rivers soar'...Top score!

the sky then for a thumping of his chest for showing-off nature at her very best To receive that seven coloured trophy garland The divine arc and arch of rainbow hues Compensating as if for the colorless rain.---Wow! ! ! Wow! ! ! and WOW! ! ! !

Love raining all the way in your poem. Fantastic poem with great passion.5****

A well penned poem. Good use of imagines.

Nice poetic style of describing rain and saving water.Water cycles beween sky and earth.

This is a very good and very creative poem.

Hi s.zaynab kamoonpuri. You put a lot of comparisons into this and they were a refreshing outlook. I appreciated that very much as it shows you have a lot of insightfulness. Well done in a variety of interesting approaches to writing. A rare talent. Trevor

Beautiful poem. Rain is both romantic and dazzling too.......10

That is a fine narrative! I really like the way the words flow, just like the rain...

Rain is evocative