Sunday, April 22, 2012

The Raven On The Wire Comments

Rating: 5.0

Such a bird I never saw,
The raven on the wire,
That croaked caw, caw.
Blacker than any,
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Juan Olivarez
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Valerie Dohren 24 April 2012

Wonderful - can picture the scene.

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Valerie Dohren 24 April 2012

You make the scene so realistic, like Smoky I can se and hear this bird. Wonderful poetry.

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Smoky Hoss 24 April 2012

Absolutely wonderful; I can see and hear our fine feathered friend flying free and far! ! !

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Heather Wilson 23 April 2012

That is just beautiful, I can see that raven, just felt sorry he flew away, a brilliant poem.

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